The moment Edward leaves, Bella curls up in a fetal postition, goes numb for months then jumps off a cliff.
She decides that without Edward, she has no reason to live anymore, even though she unexplainably can hear him inside her mind. Honestly? What a baby.. Luckily, Jacob is there to save the day! He saves her life and Bella and him start hanging out. Luckily, Jacob saves her from attempted suicide and starts hanging out with her. At this point in the story, I’m starting to hate Jacob a little less and begun to eventually like him, because he’s more of an original character than Edward. He makes mistakes, unlike Edward. He has a potential at a realistic relationship with Bella, unlike Edward. I was actually starting to enjoy Bella’s somewhat odd relationship with Jacob, and the book in general, which kind of surprised me – until Edward showed up again. Then, the writing dissolved once again. Bella’s melodramatic, lovesick, woe-is-me-I-am-the-center-of-the-universe depression was annoying as hell, and that was the whole book for the first 100-some pages. The writing was a lot crappier than the stellar stuff I saw in Twilight. I don’t know what was going on with this book, but I hated it.
But I liked the blank pages thing Stephanie did in the beginning, to sybolize the zombie months. It was unique!
Hahah I love your reviews! You add so much of your personality into them, makes your reviews unique!
ReplyDeleteLOL thanks! I just write what I would say in person :)
DeleteAnother great review ;) good job, though I always liked Jacob better :P
ReplyDeleteThanks :) Really?? I didn't like him at all in Twilight. He was too nice. Edward was much better ;)
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